Topic Sentences
Topic
sentences are the sentences that usually come at the start of a paragraph and
they make clear what the POINT of that paragraph is going to be. They should:
- Refer
clearly to the question, often using a key word like ‘trauma’
- Talk
about an effect on the audience created by the writer
- Make
clear the link between this paragraph and the previous one
- Often
include connectives
- Be as
concise as possible
- Use
the writer’s name
The following example topic sentences were written
in response to the question ‘Compare the way that Seamus Heaney conveys the
experience of childhood trauma in ‘The Barn’ and another poem of your choice.’
- Heaney
effectively depicts the persona’s childhood trauma as his imagination
twists out of control in ‘The Barn’ …
- The
impression of a child’s over-active imagination is also suggested in
‘Death of a Naturalist’ as …
- The
childhood experiences described show the pain and anguish the persona is
suffering.
- Heaney
additionally uses words with war-like connotations to create a feeling of
fear.
- By
creating a suffocating and trapped atmosphere within the poem, Heaney
conveys the experience of childhood trauma successfully.
- In
both poems words with connotations of death are used to amplify the morbid
atmosphere.
- The
persona’s trauma in ‘The Barn’ is shown through the use of war-like words
which have connotations of death and horrific, terrifying events.
- Heaney
shows how oppressed he felt when …
- Heaney
often gives the impression that the persona is small, weak and
insignificant in comparison to the outside world
- Heaney
uses the personification of everyday things to give the impression that
things are not what they seem.
- Furthermore,
we see Heaney use the same technique in Mid Term Break when …
Notice that, for instance in the last example, not
all of these topic sentences actually use the words trauma. This is because the
words ‘furthermore’ and ‘same technique’ make it clear that the point in this
paragraph is the same as in the one before and so there is no need to repeat
it. This is not only concise but also creates a smooth link between the
paragraphs.