Making Points: Connotations and
Quotations
When
you are making your points there are a number of things that you should
remember to do in order to get a good grade:
·
Refer clearly
back to the question
·
Use a linking phrase
or connective, some examples are below
·
Use embedded
quotations to support your point where possible
·
Use more
than one quotation to support the points that you are making
·
Try to use
quotations or references which are as short and precise as possible
·
Analyse the
quotations by picking out the key words and discussing their connotations (or
whatever the key feature is) and how this affects the audience
·
Do not just list
the connotations or meanings of something, try and say what impression it
creates of the Victorian Education system
Linking phrases and referring back to
the question:
Here
are some examples of linking phrases. Often these will come at the start of a
paragraph or sentence to show how this paragraph or sentence links to or
contrasts with what has gone before. There are also some examples of these
linking phrases in use within sentences:
Joining
Phrases |
Contrasting
Phrases |
Concluding
Phrases |
In
addition, Additionally, |
In
contrast, Contrastingly |
Thus |
Moreover, |
On
the other hand, |
Therefore |
Furthermore, |
However, |
|
This
is emphasised / reinforced |
Conversely, |
|
Additionally, the image of the ‘white light to guide me’ is used to
…
Achebe,
moreover,
uses words with connotations of malnutrition and disease, such as …
Furthermore,
the adult world is portrayed as …
Okara also makes
use of … to effectively insinuate that the adult world is an emotionally cold place
lacking in any genuine human connection
The
use of … is another method that Scanell uses to
emphasise the excitement and energy of the game ‘Hide and Seek’.
However, Fanthorpe’s most effective method of depicting
the naivety and innocence of children is …
Embedded quotations:
Below is an example of a paragraph that
uses embedded quotations.
The
naivety of the compound phrases ‘gettinguptime’ and ‘timeformykisstime’ help to create a sense of innocence in
the child as the impression is that he is unable to properly break up the
phrases that he has heard from adults into their constituent parts and thus
treats them as whole ideas. This sense of naivety is reinforced by the
capitalisation of the word ‘She’ to refer to the teacher which bespeaks the awe
and reverence the child feels towards this figure of superiority an idea
further accentuated by the hyperbolical fear the child seems to have at having
done ‘Something Very Wrong’ and his equally exaggerated conviction that he has
escaped ‘into ever’ as a result of not being able to tell the time.
Below is an example of a paragraph that
does not do this, both make good points but notice how the first one flows much
more smoothly than the second.
In
‘Half Past Two’ Fanthorpe uses the phrases ‘gettinguptime’ and ‘timeformykisstime’
to create the impression that the child is naïve and has not properly
understood the way that adults talk to him. The connotations of ‘She’, which is
capitalised, suggest the teacher is viewed as a figure of authority and is
given an almost God-like status. Equally the ambiguity of the phrase ‘Something
Very Wrong’ suggests that the child is unaware of exactly what crime has been
committed and that he believes it is bad because he has been told so. The
capitalisation seems to emphasise the sternness with which we can imagine these
words were spoken to him and an image is created of a child frightened by an
authority and bewildered by an arbitrary seeming set of rules that it does not
fully understand.