The Cell – Example Descriptive
Writing
A short, sharp, blinding ray of light flashed into sight.
The fleetingly short glimpse of light was immensely painful to my eyes. It
seemed so long that I had actually seen anything that sight had become almost a
distant memory to me. For such a great period of time I had longed to see
something. Although my need for visual stimulation was becoming tedious, it was
nothing in comparison to my hunger. My desperation for nourishment was
increasing by the hour, and the occasional smell of bacon sandwiches from what
I assumed was the next room acted as a constant reminder of my hellish and
seemingly unjustified torture. Although the smell of food did cause me great
anxiety, in some way it acted as a reprieve from the foul stench that
encapsulated the room in which I at times thought I might die. The smell was an
unpleasant mixture of urine, sweat, and what I can only describe as pain. The
smell of pain was something that in all my years I had never smelt before, and
is undoubtedly an odour that I under no circumstances
wish to be subjected to again. At first, I could not quite put my finger on
what that smell was but the tedium and boredom that I was suffering from
resulted in me spending many dreary hours racking my brains trying to identify
it. As the days passed and my conditions and morale worsened, I began to slowly
figure out what it was, until at what was quite possibly one of my lowest
points, I finally diagnosed it as pain. The smell of pain has no precise definition,
but if you have even been in this type of situation, the stench is
unmistakable.
After what seemed like an age, my severe mental anguish
became utterly unbearable. My agony and torture was like the black sea, and in
it, I was drowning., The distant murmur of talking and
the occasional muffled fit of laughter added to my deepening feeling of
isolation. It had been so long since I had even spoken to a person, let alone
seen one. My throat felt so tight due to me being restricted to a small glass
of foul smelling water a day, that I was beginning to
believe that I would be unable to talk. I often doubted that the water I was
given really was water, thinking that my capturers may be playing an awful
trick on me and making me drink their bodily waste, but my seemingly
unquenchable thirst meant that I would simply have to drink it or run the risk
of dehydration.
As my torment continued, the risk of dehydration was
becoming an ever increasingly more favourable option.
At times, I pondered on whether it would be better to just give up on myself,
but whenever this demon like though crept into my head, I forced myself into not giving up hope; if
not for my sake, then for the sake of my beloved family. I seldom thought of my
family. It was not that I was being self-centred or
because I did not love them. I tired not to think f them because it caused me
such great pain.
Every night or when I was tired, I would force myself to
sleep. Sleep was one of the few activities that I enjoyed, merely because my
dreams were far better than reality. Within my own dreamland, the torture and
pain that haunted me during my waking hours were virtually non-existent. I was
able to do whatever I wished in my dreamland, but it was when I was in my
sanity protecting wilderness that the next chapter of my hellish encounter with
evil unfolded.
In what seemed like a matter of seconds, I was brutally
bundled out of my cell and pushed into a vehicle. The vehicle felt damp and
smelt of rusty mould, and there was an extremely uneasy atmosphere within the
vehicle that heightened my anxiety. I waited. The door was still open, allowing
me to finally take a deep breath of fresh air. The air was like no air I had
ever breathed before. It was vibrant and rejuvenating. It tasted sweet, but the
ecstasy of this was extremely short-lived. Before I even realised
that I would have been able to see had I opened my eyes, my head was twisted
and pulled violently, a blindfold was positioned over my squinting eyes, and my
previously muscular but now emaciated arms were tied behind my back. The pain
in my neck following this violent onslaught was unbearable. The door was
slammed and I heard the awkward churn of the obviously aging car being locked.
Once again I was alone. Isolated. The stench within
the car was almost as foul as the smell within the confines of my cell. My
desperation was escalating by the second, and time seemed to have halted to a
complete standstill. There was no sound, I could not see, I could hardly
breathe because of the putrid smell inside the car, and I had hardly eaten in
what seemed like months; it seemed as though my senses had ripped away from me
and discarded along with the rest of my now pathetic and meaningless life. I
was completely drained, and although I was slightly pleased to have been
removed my cell, I was angry at whomever ha subjected me to such inhumane
torture. What kind of a person could, for no apparent reason, do to somebody
what had been done to me? My whole life had been snatched away from me, and
quite possibly the lives of my family destroyed in the process. My thoughts
were driving me insane, but I could not remove them from my mind. All I had
been able to do during my captured time was think, and
now, even my thoughts were turning against me. My whole life was a mess, but I
refused to relinquish my loosening grip on reality, and perhaps most
importantly – hope. Hope was all that was left in my pitiful excuse for a life.
But as long as there is hope, there is a way out.
Gunshots sounded, effortlessly awakening me from a deep and
much needed sleep prematurely. The echo of the shots rang in my ears. For so
long had I wished for sound and yet now, ironically, I yearned for nothing more
than for them to stop. They didn’t. For what seemed like an eternity the
gunshots continued. Panic surged through and took hold of my body leaving me
motionless, as if I was paralysed. My blindfold
slipped off, and although I could finally see, all I was able to o was stare. I
stared blankly at inanimate objects for an age until slowly my consciousness
evaporated and I drifted away.