What impression of war is created
by Owen in his poem Dulce Et Decorum Est?
Main Point 1: Powerlessness of
soldiers, hopelessness of the situation,
Subpoint:
Relief is distant. They have far to travel until they reach peace once more.
Evidence: Distant rest-Peace is far
away and it will be hard to attain again. Haunting flares-Will always follow
them wherever they go. They can not avoid the everlasting memory and are
powerless against it. We turned our backs-trying to forget but the flares are
too bright. Futile attempts. Men marched asleep-contrast. They are marching
which is soldier like but failing as they are too exhausted. Their outward
appearance is breaking down. In all my dreams-The memory is forever with him
and he will always remember. Rhyming pattern ABAB- a regular alternating rhyme
scheme, monotonous sequence. Impression of soldiers marching. Pace-Monotonous,
soldiers marching without meaning or emotion. A shell of their former self. A
list of the first and second lies creates a monotonous effect and emphasizes
the fatigue and pity. The fact that the last sentence of the first stanza has
only 9 syllables could suggest that the gas shells are closer to the soldiers
than the peace they crave. Tension. Hanging-gives the idea of dying unexpectedly.
Subpoint:
Horrific conditions implied by hopelessness of the situation. Exhaustion and
the sense of defeat. War affects us both psychologically and physically.
Evidence: Old beggars- Impression of
being pathetic, nothing more than animals, scorned and frowned upon and frail.
Creates pathos and makes us feel sympathy for them. Begging for their lives.
Coughing like hags- harshness and suffering. Hags are unpleasant images of
decrepit old women-diseased and contagious therefore no one wants to have anything
to do with them. Knock kneed-alliteration, sense of it being never ending.
Harsh sounds, stressed/beaten down. Sounds diseased and arthritic and the
onomatopoeic sound suggests fear. Bent double- Emphasized by being at the
forefront. Sense of weakness. Harsh sounds. Limped on-Desperate, despair. They
are willing to run away and escape from the tragedy they have entered even if
it torments them. All went lame, all blind- treated like they have finally lost
their humanity and are now regarded as mere animals. Hyperbole-war affects
everyone, it doesn’t matter whether you are strong or not. Fumbling in the
darkness, Stumbling and falling countless times. They are “groping” for their
humanity and dignity but can no longer get it back. The monosyllables suggest
that they have been stripped of everything they valued and are now left bare
for everyone to see-they are exposed and can no longer hide from the
memories-disabled. An impression of bluntness and dullness, Owen also uses
simple words so that a general audience can understand the reality as it is.
Blood shod-emphasised by caesura. Drenched with blood but they have also seen
and dealt death. Their own blood, their shoe have been torn and they re walking
on dead bodies. The blood will permanent stain their feet. Gruesome. Deaf even
to the hoots-Melancholy, soft. An owl hoot signifies sadness, despair, tragic
signifies the tragedy about to befall them-prescience. They do not notice the
bombs anymore. They have heard so much and spent so much of their time among
the noises that it has now become background noise. They are only intent on
escaping not fighting any longer. Gas-shells- something dark, evil and sinister
hidden inside a simple and harmless shell. Deception. Sibilance also suggests
the sinister nature of the gas shells. A cunning death. Dropping softly behind-
Impression of rain or snow falling. Peaceful. They can no longer tell danger
and serenity apart. They are falling out of the sky like rain droplets and
before they explode they are fascinating and mesmerizing to watch. Luring the
soldiers closer. The calm before the storm.
Main Point 2: Absence of glory,
patriotism and aggrandizement of war, no heroism or victory established
Subpoint:
Owen depicts the soldiers as being downtrodden, defeated, humiliated and
desperate. Going against the expectations of the people at home and what the
propaganda as painted them as and of the reality
Evidence: Bent double: The soldiers
are low. Impression of defeated soldiers
which usually we view as strong and valiant. Represents the loss of pride and
dignity. Weak. There is no noble image and they are being compared to old
beggars. Men marched asleep-going against expectations as men are meant to be
strong and courageous. Contrast between marching: what they should be. And
Limp: what they are. Trudge-they are not marching anymore. A slow walk a
pathetic and desperate bid for escape. No enthusiasm present. Drunk with
fatigue-a low activity and not what noble men should be ding. They want to
forget everything that has occurred and that they have experienced. Old
beggars: Simile, impression of being wretched and of homelessness. They
no longer view anything as a safe haven or sanctuary. Poison gas- slow
agonizing death with no glory present. Unexpected and it is not instantaneous
like a bomb therefore the soldier will have to undergo a lot of suffering.
There is no glorious charge into victory.
Subpoint:
The slow and tortured death of the soldier is emphasized and described in
detail.
Evidence: Drowning-one of the most
terrifying and agonizing deaths. Choking-something is killing him. Something
not tangible that is slowly taking away is life. He can not see the enemy even
though it is already inside him, therefore he can not fight against it-futile
attempts at resistance. Under a green sea: Secondary connotations of being
treacherous and mysterious. Deceiving, unpredictable, calamity. The soldier
will eventually be forgotten amid the countless waves of time, no remembrance.
Yelling out- calling desperately for help but he is too late and death has now
claimed him for His own. Man in fire: A slow death and also implies the fact
that the soldiers can not put out the blaze inside him and that it will keep on
burning until there is nothing left. Thick green light: unearthly. Can no
longer see him as he is fading. Death is stifling him. Dim-His life is
flickering out. Floundering-attempting to survive-basic instincts are taking
over-no more reason he is now a bare man. Guttering-he is going out bit by bit
like a candle. Enjambment of the third stanza suggests a slow death. An
inescapable and ignominious death.
Main Point 3: The helplessness of
the persona
Evidence: Plunges at me-revenge, as
if he alone were responsible for the soldier’s death. He feels guilty and holds
himself responsible-feeling of regret and great sadness. He could have made the
choice to give him his gas mask but he did not take the chance. Calling for
aid, he has been reduced to pleading and begging-pure terror of the horror that
awaits him. Misty panes: Seen through a window. The soldier is cut off from the
rest of the world and he can no longer be saved. An alien-unrecognisable.
Unreachable and distant, isolated.
Someone still-feeling of dread that someone did not make it. Creates
tension. Helpless sight-He can not do anything. A bystander watching a perverse
gruesome pantomime that he has no control over.
Main Point
4: The panic and desperation of the soldiers when they realize they are under
attack.
Evidence: Gas! Gas! Quick boys!-An
order. Hurried. As if they have experienced it before. Panic and fear. Contrast
to the first stanza where the pace is slow and calm whereas the second stanza
gives the impression of being fast and panicked. The first stanza ends calmly
while the second starts in a frenzy - it is never safe in war, the reality is
much worse. Walking in from a bad dream into a genuine nightmare. The contrast
also accentuates the shock. Exclamations dramatize the sentence and make the
scene more intense and repetition emphasizes the reason of their desperation. The
monosyllables add a fast pace and intensity. Ecstasy of fumbling-Confusion. A
frenzy and an overpowering emotion has gripped them. Feelings so intense that
they can not tell their separate emotions apart anymore. They have exceeded
their limits and are left a mess. Exhilaration and fear. Fumbling-panic,
clumsy. Clumsy helmets-Betraying them refusing to go on. As if everything and
everyone was plotting against them and causing their deaths. Personification.
Lack of preparation of the soldiers. Just in time- A very passionate relief is
felt as all the soldiers think that they are all safe from the gases.
But-feeling of dread that someone did not make it in time. Contrast they
believed they made it but they did not. An illusion created by their corrupted
minds. Stumbling-Blind and alone. Forgotten no hope left only despair and
trepidation. Or lime-A sour taste, unpleasant. Everyone wants to get away from
it.
Main Point 5: The persona feels
betrayed and is disgusted by the propaganda and recruiters for making him
believe the old Lie
Subpoint:
He is disgusted that the propaganda has corrupted innocent boys into believing
that war is glorious
Evidence: Quick boys- They are young
men who have been caught in the war trap set up by the recruiters. To children-
The children have been brought up to be in love with glory even if it is
desperate. They will do anything for glory as they grew up in a society that
aggrandized war. They want to go to war to prove themselves worthy of being men
and thus will be decorated with being honourable and courageous and will be
accepted by everyone, as is what they were taught. A chance to prove
themselves. If they do not go they are considered as unpatriotic, cowards and
children. However the desperate glory- also reflects the soldier’s desperation
in the war. The author adopts a cynical tone-there is nothing glorious about
glory. My friend- He is angry at the propaganda and generals for glorifying war
and. Innocent tongues- They have done no wrong and yet they are at the
receiving end of someone else’s evil sins. They are reaping the debt and are
paying for other’s war crimes. They have not urged others to go to war and have
told no lies about it either, they are innocent but will soon be corrupted.
What they have experienced and done is incurable and is painful to endure
“incurable sores”.
Subpoint: He feels betrayed by the recruiters and
propaganda and is criticizing them.
Evidence: My friend you- He feels
betrayed and bitterly angry at the people who propagate the Lie. Sarcastic and
ironic as friends are not meant to lead you to your death. Children- he does
not want the propaganda to target the children and teach them the old Lie. He
feels betrayed by the generals and recruiters as the war was not what they made
it seem, wonderful and honourable. Children are easily convinced thus he feels
like they are corrupting and manipulating the children and taking advantage.
Human rights are ignored. The old Lie- capitalized. Importance is stressed and
emphasized and Owen makes the word sound like a doom and a sin-that which
brings down all men. The word is also singular therefore there is only one
great Lie. The Lie is also old as it has been told and repeated countless
times-Enjambment into the last sentence. Ends with a Latin proverb that a lot
of people would know well. Either because they have heard it before or they
themselves have told and believed in it. There is a feeling that Owen is
addressing the reader directly and is either grieving for you or is angry. Everyone
can relate to it and understand him. It has been perpetuated through the ages.
Tricking men for thousands of years. It is in the language of the educated and
not in the language of the people who are being tricked and are dying so it is
unfamiliar to them and therefore they do not fully understand its full and
ulterior meaning. The language of the liars. Going against expectations and
instills a feeling of mistrust as the educated are supposed to lead us all not
betray us. Lie- personified. Human. Has tricked all of these soldiers maliciously
and is apathetic towards their deaths. You- Personal and close. He is talking
directing to the generals and recruiters. A connection is established between
Owen and the reader therefore you feel as if you were directly behind the
corpse wagon and experiencing the events occurring. We are just watching a film
and we are safe and comfortable while the soldiers are dying. You partially are
responsible, a shift in focus. It separates us from them. We have a choice. We
can stop believing the Lie and stop telling people to go to war. Also an
accusation as these people, YOU, have ruined young lives and have lied.
Main Point 6: Absence of an
honourable death and a sense of inescapability and inhumanity are present.
Subpoint:
The soldier is treated like an animal and his death is torturous.
Evidence: Smothering- Stifling him.
Slowly squeezing out his life. It is inescapable and inevitable. Wagon-a corpse
wagon- he is no longer human. Flung him in- Inhuman treatment. Treating him
like he is dead even though he is still alive. They know he will eventually die
and now view him as devoid of soul. Creates pathos and lets us feel what to
soldiers must have been through in order to act like this and be so
indifferent. White eyes writhing- Unnatural, white eyes could indicate fear and
terror at his impending doom. They also have connotations of being ghostlike
and demonic as if the soldier was soulless and a devil. Writhing - snakish and
wily connotations. Death is cunning. Torture, suffering is evident. His eyes
are rolling and still attempting to search for an escape and freedom from
death. Realm of madness. Devil’s sick of sin- He is compared to a devil
saturated with sins, lies and treachery. The soldier is inhuman, he has passed
into the void of ghosts from which he can not return. He is entering hell and
becoming like a demon. Hear, jolt- Onomatopoeia. Harsh sounds reflect the poor
and dangerous conditions in war. It does not sound smooth but rather sudden and
unexpected. A sensory image, visual and auditory. This engages the reader and
feels real. Gargling-gargling his own blood. Disgusting image. He is killing
himself. Bitter irony, as blood is supposed to keep him alive and yet it is his
undoing. Ignoble death. Contrast between what is believed to be true and the
reality, similar to the concept of war. A blood red spring, gushing out of his
mouth and impossible to stem. A very powerful word and a sense of sickness and
a horrifying experience, springs are supposed to represent birth not death.
Cancer- painful and slow death. Enjambment between 5 and 6 suggests the
longevity of the death. Bitter- Vile taste. Strong imagery. Straight forward
and stressed word thus gives it a sense of bluntness. Dulce et decorum est -
Harsh consonants- reflects everything the soldier has experienced. A contrast
between what is believed as the words would be expected to be soft and gentle
and not harsh. Pro patria mori- short sentence- idea of being cut off early.
Soldiers can die anytime in war. A finality. Mori- death. Ending of the soldier’s
life and everything Owen believed in.
Subpoint:
The persona can not escape from his memories.
Evidence: Smothering dreams-
overwhelming and killing him. Corroding his mentality. The soldiers can’t escape
war, the persona can’t escape memories. All my dreams- It will forever haunt
him and he will always remember. Following him everywhere. Cancer- There is no
reprieve for the horrors endured. Once you are fighting there is no turning
back. A bleak prospect of death. Hopeless.